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For many hours we spoke.
It came to me that perhaps
You were history repeating itself.
That maybe you weren't real-
Or I wasn't.
Either seemed more probable than
Some like you and someone like me
Actually being together.
So I debated,
And you replied,
Your answers were not as I expected
Lending credit to your claims.
Still,
The nagging doubt will exist,
Until the day we finally meet
Face to face,
Flesh to flesh.
Even then,
I might doubt.
After all,
Some hallucinations seem VERY real.
But even if you AREN'T,
Even if I am a figment of your imagination,
Or you of mine,
I hope you never vanish.
That we will always be at least friends.
I cannot bear to lose anymore people I care about.
I cannot lose YOU.
Promise not to vanish,
Please?
And don't banish me
If I turn out not to be real?
After all,
You must need me,
Like I need you…
Right?
I have a hard time decideing what and who is real...
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MabusTheDark Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I keep telling you that you're smart! This is great stuff. :)
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KittySib Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Thanks! 0.0
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summerpoetry Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I agree that it really is so personal and emotional. I wonder the same things sometimes. But I'm pretty sure you're real!
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KittySib Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
YAY!:D :tighthug:
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me4music Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Writer
This was really beautiful. I loved how it was so personal and emotional, yet it was something that lots of people can probably relate to. Gorgeous piece.
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KittySib Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Thank you very much!:D
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